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You can find all my existing fan-fiction on my ff.net account, my deviantArt profile, or my Avatar Spirit fanfic thread. Additionally, I've mirrored some of my better fics to the [livejournal.com profile] avatar_fans  community, and posted others to various exchanges, so you can read and/or comment on them right here on LiveJournal:

Lioness
The Chosen
Seeking the Why
Lady on Fire
Foresight
Working It Off
Nemesis
Dawning
The Magnificent Two
Levers & Journeys

Thanks for stopping by!
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Remember when I was called out on TVTropes as one of the greatest ATLA fanfic'ers? Well, my troper fan (Agogobell) has been active again. Now, Retroactive has a page on TVTropes. Granted, it's not much more than a placeholder, but I'm not about to let a whole page devoted to a work of mine languish in obscurity. By the time you read this, I'll probably have added it to the Fanfic index page, and maybe even completed a larger description of the story. I'm going to add as many tropes as I can, but I'm not all that experienced with troping, so hopefully some other people will make their own additions.

This leaves me with a question, though. How much of Retroactive's story is a spoiler? Should I consider anything after the first big twist on Kyoshi Island a spoiler? Or only answers to the mysteries set up by that twist, and subsequent major twists? I'm leaning towards the latter, putting a warning up in the description that going into the story completely cold is the intended method of reading, and the descriptions of the tropes that follow are going to assume that the reader is already familiar with the basic premise as established by the "Faces, Old and New" chapter.

I'd protest that Retroactive probably isn't good or notable enough to get a TVTropes page, but it's definitely a fairly unique effort in ATLA fanfic, and 'How I Became Yours' has a page on that site, so as long as we're promoting the worst the fandom has to offer, why not also acknowledge when one of our own displays a little ambition, eh?

Now I've set myself up to earn a TVTropes page for every single multi-chapter story into which I actually put planning effort. (Note: I create the Mai's Ramblings page myself for fun.) Hopefully I won't screw up my clean sweep at some point in the future. On that note, I should probably bury the idea for that "Sokka and Azula fight Vampire Kyoshi Warriors during a Zombie Apocalypse" story before I embarrass myself.
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Title: The Contract
Rating: K+ (contains a little unexplained crude humor)
Characters: Mai, Ursa, Zuko
Notes: I wanted to do my take on the idea of a formal betrothal between Mai and Zuko as kids. Somehow, I wound up with a comedic satire of Fire Nation culture as seen through the eyes of Mai and Ursa. Weird, right?
Warning: Contains allusions to Ursa's backstory as presented in 'The Search - Part 1'

Read... )
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So, you're either enjoying my Retroactive fanfic novel or you're despairing of my writing output lately. :D According to my plans, we have 5-6 more chapters to go, but keep in mind that my plans for the Ba Sing Se arc were so awful that all of my intended chapters wound up getting split in half. (Hopefully, I've gotten better since then.) If you don't like Retroactive, there's no reason to read the rest of this journal. You should wait for Maikka Fortnight this Fall, when I'll once again be writing something that doesn't involve literally crucifying characters.

However, if you're a fan of Retroactive, or haven't yet had an opportunity to try it yet, I have a treat for you!

On deviantArt, the talented penguintejas (Light Penguin on fanfiction.net) took the initiative to create a manga-style adaptation of the first half of Retroactive's prologue.

Let me repeat that: A talented artist found my writing inspiring enough to make a comic out of it!

I encourage everyone to check out the three pages, and if you have a deviantArt account, add them to your Favorites and leave gushing comments:

Page 1
Page 2
Page 3

Personally, I can't be more thrilled. These pages look great, and really breathe life into the storytelling. Check 'em out!
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Last time, we got into heavy details about what Sokka's team would look like. I still had one slot to fill with a couple more that weren't yet completely certain, and people gave me some great suggestions to work with. However, I'd like to step away from that now without finalizing the team. I do have an idea of what I think the final team will look like, but I'd rather not set it into stone until I flesh out more of the plot and The Plot. So let's get started with that by looking at the foundation of the story- the setting.

Ideally, the setting of a story is a good reflection of its themes while also providing lots of elements that can be used and abused by the plot. I've written stories that basically just inherited a setting from some element of canon, and also stories where I had to create my own setting but basically did just a new take on a something known like "Earth Kingdom city." For this story, though, I'm going to be diving into something completely new. That is, of course, the steampunk casino.

My original idea was... )
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Here we are again, planning a story I call "Sokka's Eleven," about how Sokka reacts to adulthood and peacetime by lashing out and robbing a casino for specific reasons I'm obscuring for now. So, last time I discussed my premise, and outlined what seemed to be my Eleven crew before I said I was going to have to redo the whole thing.

The list I created last time was indeed the cast I was going to use before I shelved this story, but since picking it up again, I realized that it had major problems. (Either I needed the perspective of a little distance, or I've become a better writer since then.) I'm sure most people notice, but the core of my Eleven crew is, essentially, the gAang. If I write them as in-character then they're going to essentially get along, they're going to know how to work together, and they're not going to interact as readily with the lesser cast members who won slots on the team.

As was pointed out on my deviantArt account, Zuko and Aang especially seem like odd choices for this story. They are the Avatar and the Fire Lord, two of the world's five world leaders. It's kind of mean for them to picking on a little casino owner. Even if he is a really bad person, or trying to take over the world or something, it's just petty to rob him or her before saving the day in the traditional manner. Just like the President of the United States wouldn't have worked in Ocean's Eleven, Zuko and Aang wouldn't have worked here.

Plus, this is a story about a casino heist. I notice there's a disturbing dearth of career criminals involved.

What I need is a team that will challenge each other, have some little conflicts without the interpersonal drama overshadowing the heist itself. I need these people to learn from each other, and learn about themselves through their interactions. I need people who can undergo their own little story-arcs that tie in with the main themes. I need them to be "small" enough that they are the underdog against this casino owner. And, as Lavanya Six noted on my LiveJournal, I'm missing some important archetypes for this kind of story. So, who should I swap out, and who gets in?

Well, Sokka stays. And, as noted, Mai has a major story arc while also being a pleasantly quirky specialist. I may or may not want to give a midlife crisis and/or growing-up story to Ty Lee, but even if I don't, she can be a really useful sounding board for the other two. Teo, as I noted, fulfilled an important archetype, plot-related role, and even played into the main theme. He stays. And they all have unique skills that could be useful for the heist.

So, who's new?

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So, I was reading Star Wars: Scoundrels this weekend, a story that could have been retitled "Han Solo's Eleven" and it wouldn't be any less apt. I personally recommend the book to people who like Star Wars, Han Solo, or complicated capers, but that's not what this post is about. I enjoyed the book so much that it revived my enthusiasm for an old fanfic idea that I shelved in favor of other projects:

Sokka's Eleven.

One of the reasons I put it on the back burner was the announcement of The Promise, because my vision of Sokka's Eleven would deal with how the various characters adapt to adult life in the post-war world, and I didn't want the comic stepping on my toes. (It already ruined Last Stand of the Freedom Fighters forever. No need to repeat it.) However, since the comics have turned out to be a blight on everything that was ever good about ATLA, I'm thinking maybe I don't care about writing a story that one-ups the comics. After all, I can't do any worse than Gene Yang. Besides, Legend of Korra gives end-points for the main cast's lives that go far beyond the circumstances of the comics, so I can use work based off that information and perhaps accidentally wind up more or less compatible with what gets filled in later as "canon."

However, I'm writing Retroactive now. (Hey, maybe one or two of you haven't heard yet. Doesn't hurt to get that fact established.) I'm too dedicated to that to shelve it in favor of another novel-sized project, but I figured out the next best thing...

I'll just plan out Sokka's Eleven in public, via a series of blog posts, and see how people respond to my ideas and process.

So, first up, I flesh out the premise and major characters.Read more... )
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Sometimes, I like to listen to a piece of music to inspire my writing, getting my head in the right sense of tone and feeling. Unlike most people who use this method, though, I don't like using songs for this, I prefer something without words so that the music itself is what I'm listening to. If I were to take inspiration from the lyrics, I might as well read a book and get something with a more literary voice. But a glorious full orchestra invoking emotion and experience with its sound? Delightful and inspiring.

For "Retroactive," I've been using this method to inspire me with each chapter. I'm trying to have each chapter tell a little mini-story on its own, or at least feel like a natural subset of the overall plot. Because I satisfy my love of orchestra mostly with movie soundtracks (and John Williams in particular), giving each chapter its own musical score is an effective way for me to get in the right mindset.

I figured I'd share my inspirational pieces for the chapters posted thus far. These aren't meant to accompany the chapters, and don't exactly match the events and flow of each chapter, but are more meant to convey the general story and feel.

I held off until now because some of the music used in early chapters is actually SPOILERS for the latest chapter. So yeah, SPOILER WARNING IF YOU'RE NOT CAUGHT UP.

Warning: contains excessive amounts of orchestra, John Williams, Hans Zimmer, Howard Shore, and The Track Team. )
Also, I made a map to help me keep track of location and terrain and stuff that I posted to deviantArt. SPOILERS FOR THE LATEST CHAPTERS in this link.
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Title: Secret Origin
Rating:  T

Characters: Zuko, Mai, "Lady Rei!"
Notes: Mai gets Meta about something other than her rival ships and reception with the fandom.


Read... )

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[livejournal.com profile] lalunatique left the following feedback in one of her chapter reviews for my Maikka 2012 epic Trapped in Ba Sing Se:

Some of the dialogue tags felt unnecessary, something I forgot to add to the previous chapter's review but which applies here as well. I can sympathize because I also get the urge to control the way the readers take in the dialogue, the pauses, the pace and everything. Amy Raine talked me out of it, though, telling me to keep only the minimal number of descriptions and tags to let the readers use their imaginations. While you're nowhere near as bad as I was, you could stand to delete a 'she said' or 'she sighed' here and there.


What follows is my reply, which might be of help to other writers... )

For Luna's reply, check out Loopy & Luna's Loony Writing Adventure: Dialogue, Part 2 on her LJ.
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I don't know how many of you do this, but I like to check TVTropes' ATLA Fanfic Recommendations page for new entries every so often. It's probably the least reliable of all the things I use to find new things to read (which are mostly various respected people's Favorite Stories list on FanFiction.net, so keep adding to them), but it has the benefit of pointing me to stuff I would never normally encounter, like quirky Zutara rom-com or interesting-but-not-really-interesting AU's.

In the past, back when the list was more exclusive, I used to hope to get my own stuff on there. I did indeed eventually see two of my pieces added (Mai's Ramblings even has a TVTropes page, but I'll cop to creating it myself purely for the fun of troping one of my own works, and a rather bizarre work at that), but as the list of recommendations grew, more and more of the list failed to impress me in any way, while my longer and more impactful stories failed to get added. That's, like, double Fail. (I would like to clarify that I wasn't upset, or jealous, or bitter or anything. My thoughts could pretty much be summarized as, "Well, I guess my readers aren't avid tropers, but I rather like most of my readers. It's cool.")

So imagine my surprise when I fired up the "History" tab for the page today during my lunch hour and found that the following had been added under the "Authors and Websites" heading:

    Loopy777 is a fanfic author famed for the series [1].
  • Recommended by [[Tropers/Agogobell]]
  • Additional Info: An excellent fanfiction writer with a rather caustic sense of humor, she mainly writes stories for ATLA and Korra, though many are AU-ey. Heavily recommended are "Retroactive", "Lady on Fire", and "The Ember Island Lighthouse". Read any and all of her stuff!
That's (sic), by the way.

So, huzzah! I'm one of the premiere writers of ATLA fanfic. I've joined the exclusive ranks of Wren Sharpbeak, Lyralocke, Alabaster86, and Lady Azar de Tameran as the greatest Authors (Auteurs?) who have ever labored to put pen (quill, of course) to paper for the sake of the Avatar franchise. We need a team name, like "The Big Five" or "Team Boomerang" (because it has... um... I'll get back to you on that) or "Voltron Force" or something equally awesome and awe-inspiring. Maybe we could call ourselves the "Dangerous Ladies," except one of us hasn't been heard from in years, one of us is deceased, and one of us is... well, me, so maybe the name wouldn't really apply at all.

Although I didn't feel this way yesterday, I would just like to affirm my deep, deep belief that anyone who hasn't been added the TVTropes fanfic page is a lesser writer of fanfic. You know who you are. Which is all of you. Ha! Well, I'll make a generous exception for the ones who have at least had a story added to the page. Those peeps are allowed to eat the crumbs that fall from my dinner table. (Except for the bacon crumbs. Those are still mine, dog.)

Of course, don't take my word for it, just look at the recommendation of my Troper fan, who, despite having spotty knowledge both of the website's tagging system and my most famous work as cited by the entry itself, is a gentleperson of taste and discretion. Keep working, and maybe someday you, too, can be a Quasi-Dangerous Quasi-Lady.

Thank you all for indulging me in this moment of inspired silliness and caustic humor. In case any of Avatar Spirit's staff is reading this, I Am Joking. And remember, your ad could be here; ask about my low rates.
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Last year, I published my original outline for my Maikka Fortnight story, commenting on how I changed my plans in the writing phase and why. I wasn't planning on doing the same thing this year, as my story was meant to be a lighthearted series of comedic events, but then a plot butted in and brought its annoying friends, the subplots. Since I have an original outline, anyway, I might as well post it for those who are interested in the writing process.

For those who haven't read "Trapped in Ba Sing Se," here are the links, and let it be known that it is very much not a mere shipping fic, for better or for worse. I recommend reading the story before these notes, otherwise stuff will get spoiled and/or you won't have the foggiest idea what I'm talking about in my retrospective comments.
deviantArt: http://loopy777.deviantart.com/gallery/38991836
FanFiction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8397057/1/Maikka_Week_2012_Trapped_in_Ba_Sing_Se

As with last year, the plaintext are my original notes while anything bold in the spoiler cuts are my current comments. Discussion and criticisms are welcome.

Read... )
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My normal internet hangout is down, so I thought I'd come hang here on LJ. However, because there is nothing interesting about my life (and if there was, I probably wouldn't tell *you* about it anyway), all I have for you is fanfic. As I've randomly mentioned before in various private communications, I'm working on a multi-chapter depiction of Piandao's life story up to the point where he definitively secures his freedom from service to the Fire Nation. I've actually been working on it for several years now, not counting all the time I take off to pursue other projects or because I feel like it.

Recently, I've been pushing to finish the first complete draft, and in doing so, wound up having to go back to make some changes to previously completed chapters.

That's when I realized that my entire Chapter 2 was complete trash and needed to be re-written. Yay.

I'm still not done with it, as the rewrite effort has expanded things to the point where I'm going to have to cut Chapter 2 in half, and then if I do that I'll need to completely reshuffle things because at some (very stupid) point I thought it would be clever to have Chapter 1 set in the story's present, Chapter 2 in the past, Chapter 3 in the present, Chapter 4 in the past, etc (and if you don't get the pattern, no wonder math is considered an arcane art these days). Still, I just completed what can be considered a story arc within Chapter 2 (see, this is why it needs to be chopped up) that I submitted by itself as an entry for Avatar Spirit's unofficial short story contest. It actually won (thanks to the judge specifically not giving a word limit this time), so I figure it might be worth sharing in a more public venue. Note that this is the first draft of this particular segment, so any constructive criticism would be especially appreciated.

Click to enter that more public venue. )
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The Challenge: To produce good fanfic for the increasingly popular Korra/Yue romantic pairing, despite Korra herself being a mystery.

Prompt 2: [livejournal.com profile] lavanyasix  asked for the following:
"In the future, the isolationist Northern Water Tribe has fallen on hard time. The flower of its youth it drawn away to far-away ports like Whale Tail Island and Republic City, or rides the rails of the Earth Kingdom's Transcontinental Monorail working as traveling healers and ice-makers. Places where there's easy money for benders and more social freedoms. Poor and with an aging population, history is leaving the North behind.

But it still has the best ancient masters, especially when it comes to healing, so Korra travels there to train. And when she wonders if the city's past was really as glorious as the old folks claim it was, she decides to talk with someone who had been there at its so-called "golden age" -- the Moon Spirit herself. So the two agree to trade tales of the World As It Was and the World As It Now Is, sharing their lives with one another."


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The Challenge: To produce good fanfic for the increasingly popular Korra/Yue romantic pairing, despite Korra herself being a mystery.

Prompt 1: ASN's TyLuko4Ever asked for "Journey to the Moon"


Read... )
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