loopy777

Last year, I published my original outline for my Maikka Fortnight story, commenting on how I changed my plans in the writing phase and why. I wasn't planning on doing the same thing this year, as my story was meant to be a lighthearted series of comedic events, but then a plot butted in and brought its annoying friends, the subplots. Since I have an original outline, anyway, I might as well post it for those who are interested in the writing process.

For those who haven't read "Trapped in Ba Sing Se," here are the links, and let it be known that it is very much not a mere shipping fic, for better or for worse. I recommend reading the story before these notes, otherwise stuff will get spoiled and/or you won't have the foggiest idea what I'm talking about in my retrospective comments.
deviantArt: http://loopy777.deviantart.com/gallery/38991836
FanFiction.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8397057/1/Maikka_Week_2012_Trapped_in_Ba_Sing_Se

As with last year, the plaintext are my original notes while anything bold in the spoiler cuts are my current comments. Discussion and criticisms are welcome.

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